Sharp hero, soft specifics, and a CTA that wants two answers.
"Where teams and agents Think together" is a sentence that could be stapled to any AI tool's homepage without anyone noticing the swap.
Where teams and agents Think together.
Stop juggling tabs. Your docs, tasks, and answers in one place.
The roast
- 01"Where teams and agents Think together" is a sentence that could be stapled to any AI tool's homepage without anyone noticing the swap.
- 02"The AI workspace where teams get more done, faster" promises speed and output, then spends the rest of the page showing you cards about citations and agents.
- 03The hero does its job in five seconds, which is annoying, because it means the rest of the page has no excuse for vagueness.
- 04"Keep work moving 24/7 with agents" is a fine line, but it is doing the same job as three other fine lines stacked in a row.
- 05The CTA is "Get Notion free" in the nav and the hero, which is a clear ask, but the "Request a demo" beside it makes you pick a door before you have walked in.
Where the points went
A reader learns it is an AI workspace for teams within seconds of landing.
Headline leans on "Think together" and "get more done, faster", which could describe nearly any AI product.
Customer logos, testimonials, and concrete numbers like "Trusted by teams that ship" give checkable credibili…
Clean structure with a real H1, five section headings, and a complete social preview and meta description.
"Get Notion free" is the clear primary ask, but "Request a demo" sits beside it and splits attention.
Same product, better words
Where teams and agents Think together.
Stop juggling tabs. Your docs, tasks, and answers in one place.
Build Custom Agents, search across all your apps, and automate busywork. The AI workspace where teams get more done, faster.
Notion is an AI workspace where your team keeps notes, tasks, and wikis, and asks agents to find and act on them.
Get Notion free
Start my free workspace
Ship these three this afternoon
- 1Replace "Where teams and agents Think together" with a headline naming the job, like the tabs-and-tools pain, in the H1.
- 2Pick one primary CTA, "Start my free workspace", and demote "Request a demo" to a text link under the hero.
- 3Swap generic section lines like "Keep work moving 24/7 with agents" for one concrete example per section with a real screenshot.
Copy the fix prompt
This is the Notion marketing landing page at notion.com, an AI workspace for teams. Replace the hero H1 with "Stop juggling tabs. Your docs, tasks, and answers in one place." Set the subhead to "Notion is an AI workspace where your team keeps notes, tasks, and wikis, and asks agents to find and act on them." Make the primary CTA "Start my free workspace" and remove any competing CTA by demoting "Request a demo" to a plain text link below the hero. Replace the generic "Keep work moving 24/7 with agents" section line with a concrete example and a real product screenshot beside it. Swap the hero's abstract "Think together" phrasing for the new job-based headline in every place it appears, including the title tag. Add one concrete, dated customer quote with a named role directly under the first section to strengthen the trust block. Keep the existing brand voice and tech stack.
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